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 Hi Erika,
There is a charm to this. I like the simplicity of the first lines in each pair, and the visuall effect of the poem overall is pr...(more) |
8/10/2010 10:48:29 PM |
Hello andy:
Below are some thoughts on this for you.
I give detailed suggestions first, and ...(more) |
8/10/2010 7:27:06 PM |
Okay, here is my review. :)
I will give detailed comments first, and...(more) |
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Well, I am gonna assume you actually want some feedback on this, not just showcase the story, so... here is some feedback. :)
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Okay Fenris, my first crit of yours. :)
Technically, there wasn't much to point out here. You have a fine grasp of the craft as far as I ca...(more) |
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