Thanks!
That "As if trying..." bit is definitely going to be yanked.
I think you have to end with a choice and the conclusion is left unknown rather than writing two endings. I could be wrong though.
Writing ...(more)
This is an excellent story that drew me in right. I have some nits and a couple of details I don't quite get, but that's all in the context of...(more)
I think I can adapt a story idea I got from the sexbot thread (no actual sex in the sexbot story ironically, so it should be TOS safe) but that wou...(more)
Overall, I think this story is good and the concept is great. I like the twist you've taken on the personification of death. I did have a problem w...(more)
